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             choices          seemingly          infinite
              made             hopeful          promises
            brought              joys               beyond
          culmination           of                  truths
              bright               life                untold
               dark            unlimited             bliss
               final               nights            negated


©2005-2009 ~Metatetron
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Author's Comments

A style you will recognize from *18RedLives and from ~spartanjonesy

This is my first serious attempt at writing this way, and I found it is hard,
to think in non-linear, directions, so that it reads several different things,
with similar theme, regardless of the order the words are read.

not all of the directions, were successful, but more than I thought would be.

Anything that stretches my mind is worth the pain.

this took me about twenty minutes to write - It must’ve been Stewie in my head for weeks now

if I continue this style, I am sure I will improve, until then,
you guys feel free to shred this. I deserve it for the subject matter.

be well my friends, JohnnyW

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:icondruid69:
Very nice. It reads well either across from column to column or each column individually from top to bottom from left to right.

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"Up is a direction diametrically opposed to down" =druid69
:iconislandjoe:
excellent work man... simple and yet varied... :thumbsup:

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my blog: [link]
:iconyoru-no-ookami:
intresting piece, and intresting style

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With my sword...
those victim to it...
...in this age of possible peace...
i will...
proceed to heaven.
(Rurouni Kenshin)
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Live by the sword, and die by mine.
:iconsaschaette:
oooooooooooooooo i like :D ive never seen this style done before, but it looks very interesting, and yes i would think it would kill my brain if i did something like this, but it looks very well worth trying, one day lol...

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How like a queen comes forth the lonely Moon From the slow opening curtains of the clouds Walking in beauty to her midnight throne!

Author: George Croly
:iconmetatetron:
Then you should read ~spartanjonesy or the best, *18RedLives and Adrienne Rich, who is world famous. I cpied thenm....


John

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Do not be angry. Do not worry, Be grateful, Work with integrity, Be kind to others.
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:)

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How like a queen comes forth the lonely Moon From the slow opening curtains of the clouds Walking in beauty to her midnight throne!

Author: George Croly
:iconmetatetron:
Thank you - I hope to be able to one day, add obfuscation, allegory, allusionsa dn metaphors - but right now, that is beyond me - the damn structure ws hard enough.

John

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Do not be angry. Do not worry, Be grateful, Work with integrity, Be kind to others.
:iconmetatetron:
Thenk you, for more of it, go see *18RedLives and ~spartanjonesy

they are the masters

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Do not be angry. Do not worry, Be grateful, Work with integrity, Be kind to others.
:iconmetatetron:
Thank you, htat was a deliberate intent, in an try to mimic Adrianne's freeform use of the same thing.

i figure, If I do it on purpose long enough, maybe someday, it will flow naturally....

thank you for the kindess

John

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Do not be angry. Do not worry, Be grateful, Work with integrity, Be kind to others.

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