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:iconcrimsonthrenody:
Hmmm - thought provoking and it strangely brought on a feeling of loneliness.

I always enjoy a properly written haiku, one which reaches into the depths of meaning with words, bringing to the surface emotions you didn't realize could be stirred with such few words.

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:heart:Words are my paint, and the pen is my brush:heart:

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:iconmaurya2:
i was reading something about spirit and soul...

soul is what you are...

spirit is soul in motion...

empty space is the reflection of your life...

Grace..the movement of our life and then add shape/form...
...Empty space is defined by how we embrace it..
..........We hold within the empty space all the connections
.......................................to the universe we hold dear....

"I am solitude"

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~ everyone into the lifeboat, baby
...cause this ship is going down ~

my mantra ~ absenceoftouch ~
:iconkimete:
I see the moon. Finally. Again. I hadn't realized I'd missed it so much.

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-- I'm falling and I can't see the ground, but that's okay. The wind excites me. --

"I believe. I believe. I believe..."
:iconmetatetron:
and when the stars twinkle again - you will breathe easier and sleep easier too.

be well Judy

John

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Do not be angry. Do not worry, Be grateful, Work with integrity, Be kind to others.
:iconkimete:
Truth.

Thank you, John. :)

You too.

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-- I'm falling and I can't see the ground, but that's okay. The wind excites me. --

"I believe. I believe. I believe..."
:iconideviant:
Beautifully condensed - the subject becomes the object :nod:

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UltraGnosis Fractal Art
:iconmetatetron:
thank you.

be well

John

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Do not be angry. Do not worry, Be grateful, Work with integrity, Be kind to others.
:iconmetatetron:
I find this form is exceedingly difficult to write, such a constraint on the words, and the intent is precisely as you described it!

stirring deep emotions with the depth of the meaning of a very few words....

thank you for such high praise

:hug:

John

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Do not be angry. Do not worry, Be grateful, Work with integrity, Be kind to others.
:iconcrimsonthrenody:
Yes, they can be difficult to write properly - especially with so little space to get your point across. Some excel while other struggle, but this one was beautiful <3

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:heart:Words are my paint, and the pen is my brush:heart:

~ *getLIT ~*WordCount ~ *Adopt-A-Writer ~ *Writers-Workshop ~

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